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Friday, 28 December 2018

SLJ taupo cycle challange

If i was inn the race i would bring my mum because she is very supportive and helpful

the next person i would bring is my friend gurveer because he would cheer me on and make me confident

the last person i would bring is my sister because she would be happy for me to win!

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  2. Hey, Ben!

    Thanks for completing another Summer Learning Journey activity, 'The Great Taupo Cycle Challenge' and for telling us about the three people you'd like to take with you and why. I'm pleased to read that you'd like to take your Mum— they're really the most supportive people in our lives! Good thing you have your friend, Gurveer, as well— are they doing the Summer Learning Journey programme, too? And of course, so happy to see you mention your sister. I've got two brothers and I know that if they wanted me to support them, I would be there in a blink!
    Don't forget to add some images or colour to short posts like this, we need to keep your readers engaged and sometimes improving the aesthetics of your posts helps with that :)

    Keep up the great work, Ben!

    Cheers,

    Jordan

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