Thank you for completing another SLJ related activity.
Well done on coming up with five questions relating to Sir Edmund Hillary's voyage up Aoraki Mt Cook and Mt Everest. I see you are curious to know more about the details of how he managed to survive the trek. However are you curious to know anything else about his life?
When responding to this activity, maybe next time you could try introduce your five questions you'd like to ask Sir Edmund Hillary with something along the lines of... "For this task I had to think of five questions that I would ask Sir Edmund Hillary if I ever met him in real life."
You're on the right track, we just need to see more detail. I see on the side panel you have written that you like writing, you can write as much as you want within these blog entries. I would love to read more of your writing!
Thank you, Ben! Keep working away at the daily activities.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Ben,
ReplyDeleteThank you for completing another SLJ related activity.
Well done on coming up with five questions relating to Sir Edmund Hillary's voyage up Aoraki Mt Cook and Mt Everest. I see you are curious to know more about the details of how he managed to survive the trek. However are you curious to know anything else about his life?
When responding to this activity, maybe next time you could try introduce your five questions you'd like to ask Sir Edmund Hillary with something along the lines of... "For this task I had to think of five questions that I would ask Sir Edmund Hillary if I ever met him in real life."
You're on the right track, we just need to see more detail.
I see on the side panel you have written that you like writing, you can write as much as you want within these blog entries. I would love to read more of your writing!
Thank you, Ben!
Keep working away at the daily activities.
Cheers,
Jordan