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Tuesday, 18 December 2018

SLJ My hometown

My home town is papakura there are lots of Spectacular and Superb  bakery and cafes

a lot of house for people to call home. Quite a lot of addicting places to go

My favourite place to go In papakura is the skate park Maybe you should try living in

papakura. Im sure you will fit right in!

By ben

1 comment:

  1. Hey Ben!

    Well done for completing another Summer Learning Journey activity. Thanks for describing your hometown to us— Papakura is a beautiful place, isn't it? I like your use of descriptive language, especially the "spectacular and superb bakery and cafes."
    It's good to hear that there are a lot of houses for people to call home. What do you mean by "addicting places"— can you give me an example?
    So great to hear that you enjoy going to the skate park! Do you ride a scooter or a skateboard?

    I look forward to reading more of your posts.

    Cheers

    Jordan

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